Note: This time around i have tried something very new, i hope you people will like it. In this poem i have basically tried to put you people in certain situations and give you people with the options and asked how would you react . The concept is deep but i know my words arent mature enough and it all might seem childish an casual , but still it is a try . I want you all to answer and comment about the poem :) thankyou
What if tonight i fall asleep, never wake up again and DIE
will you mourn it and tell yourself no this cant happen ,no (Read as nao-gh)!!! .
or will you be glad about it and 'll take a SIGH ??
what if i climb up the the tallest hill, right next to the river in my town ,
will you come to save me ?? and make me realize i am grown (Read as Gra-un)
or will you stand away , let me fall and drown ?
what if you find me all broken and bruised with tears in my eye,
will you stand with me ? and condole my cry ???
or will you distant yourself and leave me high and dry ?? ?
Written by :Murtaza Hasan
z ds d 1?? when u talkd abt mistakes n it nt being gud.. man wht wr u talkng abt???? ds z 1 PERFECT poem!!! infact i hv 1 jst lyk ds bt its nowhere as gud as urz!!! wowwww i love it!! original simple bt d feelngz echo...!! nthng wrong wd d wrdz eithr it z totally amazng id say i find ds 1 best frm bqi sari though they all r gud too..
ReplyDeletethankyou ALHAMDOLILAH :)
ReplyDeleteand serioulsy this comment means alot Fatima :)